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Let's be younger
Close our eyes and remember ourself
Ten years ago, five years ago

Just to be younger
Does it require a visa?
Do they need to know how much would I earn now?

You are free when you're younger
Don't love anybody — or do you?
Who really cares, you have as much time as you wish

I want to go there with you
Being young alone isn't that fun
Although it's better than not to be young

I'm not old
Not old yet at all
But I can't understand how to end this joke
Never had such a problem when I was — you know
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This is the Broken Dreams Corner
Of my notebook

Several routes I'm not going to follow
A little helpful brochure I'll never write

It's good I'm not an artist
Otherwise, I'd lock you up in this corner too
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You're a treat, Goldin 8) .

I know precisely the feeling you describe... being a melancholy type.

It's good to see you contributing here :D


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Lizzie
xox
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~ Oscar Wilde
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Lizzie, YOU are a treat, the kindest person I've met!
Thanks for your reply :D
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:) xoxox :)

I don't feel so badly now, knowing that you're not going to Amsterdam... that's only because I can't go, either :?
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I long to taste again the Mythos
Enjoy the morning harbour view
Awaiting for our further meetups
I'm less a Goy and more a Jew
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Other People's Pain

When White Russia turns red
a spot spreads on a linen shirt
a bright balloon conquers the sky
the other people's pain comes to you
and stays and writes in milky letters
words that you are yet not able to read
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Thank you for sharing Goldin, keep on with the writings pls and the "let's be younger"

anny
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Thank you, Anny!
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Post by tom.d.stiller »

Dear goldin, the essence of your poem - to me - is in these two lines. And a very substantative essence it is.

Can you imagine to reconstruct the rest form there?

A visa (permit for entering or leaving a country) for the realm of poetry doesn't have to be granted.

Just go on...
Goldin wrote: Sat Jul 16, 2016 11:46 pm Just to be younger
Does it require a visa?
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