Who Am I
waking up to cold remorse
stiff movements chart the coarse
effort met halfway
broken strides bury the day
swept forward in midst of the swarm
reflective suggestive a common norm
I fear most before I die
I'll blink and say who am I
Salut
Elazar
Who Am I
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Re: Who Am I
by fishfishquaileye on Sat Feb 04, 2012 2:59 am
elazar wrote:Yes. Select your prize
Norm! Cheers!
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Re: Who Am I
by elazar on Wed Feb 22, 2012 8:08 pm
fishfishquaileye wrote: Norm! Cheers!
So Brave! So Sweet!
breath deep and live
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Re: Who Am I
by Dennis Dwight Baker on Fri Feb 24, 2012 4:48 pm
"I" is attached to reason/individual as "I AM" is attached to spirit/faith.
Who "AM I" and Who "I AM" walk together.
Who "AM I" and Who "I AM" walk together.
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Re: Who Am I
by elazar on Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:05 pm
Interesting, Dennis... sounds like the "perfect" balance I've been searching for all this time! Well done!
breath deep and live
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Re: Who Am I
by lizzytysh on Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:03 pm
"I" is attached to reason/individual as "I AM" is attached to spirit/faith.
Who "AM I" and Who "I AM" walk together.
A simple and concise reduction. I really enjoyed that, and especially conjunct elazar's poem.
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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