I stake a claim

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I stake a claim

Postby Pete on Tue Aug 06, 2002 6:15 pm

I stake a claim
on someone
who eludes perception
I stake my claim
before my audience
senses the rejection I may endure
and cascade pity
in sympathy's disguise
I stake a claim
on the candle
that illuminated the prize
that is ours
I stake my claim
with the unknown certainty
of losing
to the highest bidder


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Postby lizzytysh on Tue Aug 06, 2002 6:21 pm

These are interesting perceptions, Pete, of one of the ways we go about making our lives real for us....and how elusive and sometimes fearful it all can be. I like it.
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