Dance me to end of the ballroom

[peter danielsen]

The world is seated along the walls in the ballroom
while the poet dances alone
caught in the cone of light of a mad G_D

[Byron]

peter, try it without 'round.'


Just a thought.

[peter danielsen]

Thanks for your replies Byron, got rid of the round, much better

[Byron]

It is always difficult to decide whether or not to 'hint' at a possible change. I've read loads of your work and felt comfortable that my 'hint' wouldn't be construed as anything but meant in the best of thoughts.